Wednesday, May 09, 2007

 

Post New Articles for Descriptive Writing here

Post New Articles for Descriptive Writing here.

Click 'Comments' to post the URL of your work. I'll look at your draft starting 5/11 to 5/17.

Comments:
Here is my paragraph, please take a look.
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfh595mq_10fmmcrj
 
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dg228hp3_9dgjqsh
 
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http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfbbmnbr_12g7t37g
 
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http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=ddwqx3nc_4c9b9sn
 
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http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=d8b449c_9cnzn8k
 
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Dear Teacher: I have rewritten my pargraph, could you please check it again? Thank you so much.
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dg228hp3_9dgjqsh
 
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfgcjbc2_6cx3js9
 
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfz55gfk_5gbtv7g
 
PE2A 2094200032 Nana Lin May 26 , 2007


How balanced about the work and school


Alought do well at work and school are not easy , but there are more steps


must to follow . The first step is look for the most urgent thing to be done first .


Next , to list the thing that is needed to deal with every day . It can remind yourself


not to miss important item . Then utilize and read at break . Time is valuable . Do’nt


waste . Finally , it is necessary for the regular life . Just there is physical power that


deals with these . The work and school enrich my life . The work brings the income


and value . School is the satisfaction of the cultural life . Both are very precious
 
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dhqdcjkq_7dqsnv8
 
Those are my paragraphes. Please take a look. by Sean 2094200159 PE2C

http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=d8b449c_10gjr8bv&hl=zh_TW

http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=d8b449c_14fbh6kz
 
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Aiden
 
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